The advice I would give to someone in not writing their paper is to not wait for the last couple days its due or even wait for the last minute. I would advice them to take a lot of time when it comes to researching about their topic, because it will be very worth it at the end. I feel that in the past ten weeks I might of improved myself a bit on the thesis statement, since I had trouble in that area. I also think I improved myself in using different brain storming methods, that helped me come up with more information regarding my topic. Although I think I have improved a bit in my thesis statement I know I am going to continue in bettering myself in that area to be a better writer. I can sure say this has been a great class this semester and was able to interact with everyone. I really will appreciate all the help I received and feedback from everyone, because I think all of you made me improve a bit more as a writer. I can truly say I did not expect this class to be very fun like it has been, since I went through this class before and did not receive much help. I think I would love to have classes like this one where the student is helped to be able to reach her/ his goals. Professor you made this class fun and interesting, Thank you & everyone. = )
Wednesday, July 7, 2010
With my paper almost done and to be turned in by Tuesday I feel good about it. I think I have done a really good job and have taken a lot of feedback from everyone that is important to me to be a better writer. I feel nervous and accomplished at the same time. I feel nervous, because i am thinking about the grade I will receive in my final paper. I know that from the grade I receive I will look into my paper a bit more after and see what I could have also done better since my topic is also something that interested me. I feel accomplished, because throughout this term I have learned sow much from my professor and classmates. I know I will take in many things that were said to me throughout the discussions, because it has been a great help. I will sure miss interacting wit many off you, this was a very great class. I believe that I have improved the way I write by applying new techniques throughout my coursework. I think that being able to write about something you have not heard about used in a topic makes it more exciting in a way, because you get to also learn more about the topic and also it not only keeps the writer interested but the readers attention. As well I believe that being able to write about something new can be a challenge and see what areas are needed to be worked on better. Wow! if I had to choose other topics I would like to talk about and learn more about are the effects of helium in the body, the effects of bed wetting in children, the effects of bad posture, the effects of video games on children , the effects of having a gallbladder removed, I think their are many topics more that would interest me to write about and know more about like the ones I mentioned. I was very happy with the topic I chose to write about in this class, it was something new to me and many.
Thursday, July 1, 2010
Throughout the process during the coursework I have not had any issues with the class. I probably have only has a bit of a difficult time getting my thesis statement correct. I really have enjoyed being able to receive feedback from my professor and classmates. I find it very helpful to receive the comments, because it can give me more ideas, what sounds good, what should i change and other things. Receiving comments on my blog post are very cool to hear from all of you as well reading the blogs from everyone else. I probably will most likely keep my blog and continue blogging about what I am up to out here in California, since it is a very neat way to keep in touch with all of you. I want to say Thank you all for your comments and feedback throughout this term. = )